Proyecto Trunder(Trabajo de Fan)

para el  bien de ayudar  en su trabajo , el autor  desea criticas constructivas , por ahora nos pasa su borrador y de como va la historia , ya hara su v2

¿como va la historia?

trata de el hijo de un asesino y una elfa… ellos eran perseguidos por el demonio (translord) este ultimo trataba de obtener la espada de los truenos que llebava el alma de la elfa, el padre de thunder decidio pelear contra el demonio para ganar tiempo y asi su familia pueda escapar la elfa a ver eso decidio tambien quedarse a pelear pero antes le entrego parte de su alma a su hijo y su padre le

dejo la armadura lejendaria Argos y asi se iniciaron las aventuras de thunder en busca del templo del Cuervo

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